The Lady - Paris - France
La Dame - Paris
Originally shared by olivier nelis
The Lady - Paris - France
La Dame - Paris
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Hi olivier nelis! Thanks for posting. This is what I think:
ReplyDelete1) the composition looks unbalanced due to the "heavier" right part.
2) moving the tower farther from the center may make the composition stronger.
3) I'd rather use a smaller aperture for this shot to achieve higher details level and deeper depth of field.
This is my personal opinion and others may not share it.
I hope it helps.
olivier nelis Unfortunately I must agree with Michael Mossiagin The building at the right completely took our attention due to higher contrast and nearly same hight than (I guess it is) the main subject, the Eiffel tower. But I do welcome the courage requesting critical feedback. This is how we learn. One of my favorite saying is "If you want to progress listen to your critics not your mom."
ReplyDeleteMichael Mossiagin , Hi!
ReplyDeleteyou're right, this picture is a part of another one taken at 35mm... The picture can't have much definition to give us more details, sorry! ;)
Thank you for your opinion my friend!
Vili Gošnak , thank you for uyour comment!
ReplyDeleteAs I said to Michael, this picture is a part of another one taken at 35mm.
I totally agree with your favorite saying, it will be one of mine now! ;)
Have a good evening.